I agree with Pieter, it needs some sort of intro imo. The way it starts now seems a bit abrupt.
The Nox theme is missing the score and story which makes it look a bit empty. The developer info is just the publisher info mirrored probably because the xml didn't have it in there, it would be better if that was accurate so it doesn't look like the two fields are the same. Just some small details I noticed.
I think it may be a good idea to add text for nested collections and have the video show an example of that (can't remember if one does currently). It's one of the best features of RFE imo and it's one of the most popular requests for other frontends.